Rough Draft: The Complexity of Traumatic Memory

My professor, Mrs. Gordiva, pointed out several missing "puzzle pieces" that my polished essay now has. Her comments are displayed below and mainly consist of relating the information back to how it applies to and affects the real world. I was struggling with finding a strong relation between the researched information and current application but knew I wanted to relate it to criminal investigation. My professor guided me to find the exact claim I needed to point to throughout my essay. She then suggested I point to that claim in every paragraph. My polished draft a addresses all suggestions made.

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Poetry Explication: To Live as if You're Dying

As my introduction says, "What better way is there to die than falling into a gentle slumber and your soul knowing that you have lived radically for and true to your purpose and beliefs?" My poetry explication of "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night" by Dylan Thomas will tell you just that. I loved being able to dig into the significance of this poem, the life event that inspired this poem, and the way Thomas's diction, and style of writing contributed to the overall meaning. To Live as if You're Dying What better way is there to die than falling into a gentle slumber and your soul knowing that you have lived radically for and true to your purpose and beliefs? There is none. Dylan Thomas lived an untamed life of dancing on the line of alcoholism, rebelling against traditional poetry, and ignoring his wedding vows every now and then ( "Dylan (Marlais) Thomas" 3). In “Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night”, Thomas used the art...

Rhetorical Analysis: H&M Commercial, "She's a Lady"

My rhetorical analysis project was based on the ad “She’s a Lady” produced by H&M. This ad addresses the modern appeal to the popular skepticism of the traditional expectations of what makes a woman a woman. H&M addresses this topic of feminism through displaying and encouraging body diversity, freedom of expression and opinion. This advertisement is geared towards women of all ages but naturally attracts the younger crowd of women because of the twenty-first-century values weaved throughout the video. Something that stood out about my project was that I chose an advertisement that didn’t cause a negative emotion but a more empowering advertisement that politely challenged the concept of woman. She's a... Lady? What is woman? Is she delicate or strong? Is she black, white, Latino? Is she poised and put together? Does she wear size four or fourteen? From “She’s a Lady” by H&M, we can see the modern appeal to the popular skepticism of the traditional...

Invention Work: To Live as if You're Dying

An unconventional invention work, this is. This spoken version of "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night" by Dylan Thomas is what led me to choose to explicate this poem. It is spoken in the movie "Interstellar", a movie centered around astronauts who think they are fighting the good fight in order to find a new earth for the current habitats of the old, dying earth. But they figure out after decades of traveling space that the plan all along was to leave everyone on earth to die and populate the new earth with the embryos on board. This poem is referenced throughout the movie and the antagonist is the one who says it. At the moment the true motives of the mission was discovered, the poem is referenced. They realize that in order to live and fight with no regrets, they must do the right thing even though it is not easy. They chose not to be the "wise" man, "good" man, the "wild" man,o the "grave" man. The wise man would done e...

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