Mary-Kaylin Linch's Blog

        As my introduction says, "What better way is there to die than falling into a gentle slumber and your soul knowing that you have lived radically for and true to your purpose and beliefs?" My poetry explication of "Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night" by Dylan Thomas will tell you just that. I loved  being able to dig into the significance of this poem, the life event that inspired this poem, and the way Thomas's diction, and style of writing contributed to the overall meaning. To Live as if You're Dying   What better way is there to die than falling into a gentle slumber and your soul knowing that you have lived radically for and true to your purpose and beliefs? There is none. Dylan Thomas lived an untamed life of dancing on the line of alcoholism, rebelling against traditional poetry, and ignoring his wedding vows every now and then ( "Dylan (Marlais) Thomas" 3). In “Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night”, Thomas used the art...

My unedited version of my persuasive argument had a lot of work to be done! My peer editors highlighted my higher order concern as needing to be more direct when it came to my thoughts and claim (thesis). They also pointed out the need to give light on what social media is already doing to help censor certain adult themes and protect children's development. Lower order concerns stated by my peer editors were grammar, punctuation and spacing. I went through and developed a stronger thesis, corrected my LOC's and tied my essay up with a strong ending claim to to thesis.  Persuasive Argument             “ As teens have started spending less time together, they have become less likely to kill one another, and more likely to kill themselves” (Klass, “When Social Media Is Really Problematic for Adolescents”) . Have you ever looked at your phone and felt a negative emotion or struggled with your mental health bec...